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    Frozen Beauty

    The snow slowly falls

    Dancing like crystal fairies;
    Across the crystalline ground

    Bringing beauty;
    To the bitter cold

    Wisps of air;
    Follow along a sparkling path

    To guide wandering eyes;
    Towards buried brilliance

    A day soon end;
    And so to the darkened sky

    For it change to a silver shine…

    Become a wind, unfathomable distress. I'll hold back your loneliness.

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    Re: Frozen Beauty


    oooo i like this one.. you see the beauty in something that a lot of people take for granted and that is a lovely gift.. you should keep it up^^

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    Re: Frozen Beauty

    Thank you,i'm flattered really.But I don't see any "beauty" in what I do.
    These poems just come naturally.

    Become a wind, unfathomable distress. I'll hold back your loneliness.

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    Re: Frozen Beauty

    Quote Originally Posted by Seirika View Post
    Thank you,i'm flattered really.But I don't see any "beauty" in what I do.
    These poems just come naturally.

    yes but in your poem you wrote about the beauty that many take for granted.

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    Re: Frozen Beauty

    oh?
    That's one way of looking at it,but I did it based on something that happened to me last year.

    Become a wind, unfathomable distress. I'll hold back your loneliness.

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    Re: Frozen Beauty

    This poem is a good one.... And I like it ^_^! Very good! -PEACE!-
    Carve an amble now,
    Saying that the day's still bright,
    And let's play with time.

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    Re: Frozen Beauty

    Very very nice. Thats a large amount of kudos's if I've ever seen it, I usually don't like non-rhyming stuff but, this is good.


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