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    frozen butterfly

    You are a frozen butterfly,
    suspended there in flight.
    Your eyes so cold yet o so bright,
    How did you lern to fly?

    Did they strip away your dignity?
    Did thay laugh away your pride?
    In hope, that it would make you feel better inside.

    Did they tear your heart so beep whith in,
    that you have run away to hide?
    Did you think they would embrace you and keep you warm inside?

    Did you think they care enough to look or search
    within your mind?
    Did you think your colors worthy,
    when you spred your wings to fly?

    After they applauded you, they left you there to die.

    Your a frozen butterfly,
    suspended there in flight.
    I see you in my mirror,
    staring back in lonely fright.

    I'm the frozen butterfly, trapped within my pain.
    Please free my love and thaw my wings

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    Re: frozen butterfly

    hmmmm intresting poem isn't it well anyway it good.

    I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.

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    Re: frozen butterfly

    i definetly agree with sora about the interesting part- but it was a very good poem, as are all your others!
    You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same.

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    Re: frozen butterfly

    It was good, though I see you mispelled some words... lol

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    Re: frozen butterfly

    hmm, this poem is really kool, nice job man!

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    hmm...i like this poem...don't know why...it's really good, tho....i get the message of it...i think it's talking about being forgotten...right?

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    Re: frozen butterfly

    hey good job not that it matters what i think...
    Moving on Is the hardest Part

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