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  1. Jun 23, 2006 07:02 PM #9
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    Re: Frozen heart and can't look back

    Apart from a couple of Grammatical/spelling errors here and there. This piece of yours is very heart-felt.

    freeze my emotions
    freeze my tears
    freeze my heart.....
    I absolutely adore this passage. ^_^ Good work with the repetition, it really sends a clear and concise message to the audience.

    Keep up the good work, mate.
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    Re: Frozen heart and can't look back

    Execpt for a few grammartic and spelling mistakes which made me kinda confused unless u meant those words to be there......anyways everyone here has said tht it is an emotional poem which I agree

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    Re: Frozen heart and can't look back

    Spelling isn't my best friend, as you can see but thanx
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