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    frozen world, living world

    frozen animals
    frozen moon
    frozen plants all in a strewn
    someday soon i'll have your heart
    until that day i will not stray

    living animals
    living moon
    living plants ready to bloom
    one of these days i'll make you mine
    you'll be my life as i am your wife

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    Re: frozen world, living world

    Good vivid imagery with things frozen, and I love reference to the moon. It is beautiful and distant. Plus it goes with the wolf silhouette you have as an avatar.

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