Thread: Funny Poem by ME

Your so kind. :cries: buy the way welcome to Ao. You must be new.

Short and sweet, I presume. Mr. K, it is spelled as cries, not crys. Haha. Thought I should say something. Anyway! Keep it up and post some more, sugar_sweet.

Pretty simple. You couldve put a lil' bit more effort into it.

Thats not bad I hope you write more for us to read. Here is a poem for you:

In The End

Its all said and done when you fire the gun. Were always on the run without the sun.
We walk down the street with hell in our hands, We come across the land. We feel the pain all around here.
When the end is here we put the gun to your head and this what you hear: ( Gunfire, Screams & Sirens)
Silence comes over the the world. All you smell is flowers. All you see is yourself. All thats left is the pain of everyone who loved you.
In the end, as life goes on you feel really bad for the trouble you caused. The silence was there, the pain was too. But in the end it came around to you.
It felt as if you went through a time hole. You were back when you put the gun to your head, You saw your life flash before your eyes again.
You think twice about it now, but in the end...........Life was Gone....And so are You.

think about that one and make more for me. lol

Not every poem has to rhyme, remember that.

Originally Posted by kedar

Short and sweet, I presume. Mr. K, it is spelled as cries, not crys. Haha. Thought I should say something. Anyway! Keep it up and post some more, sugar_sweet.

BLAh....................

Originally Posted by Kasai

Not every poem has to rhyme, remember that.

That is very true and parts of the poem I put up did not where other parts did. But many poems show the feelings of people. I was helping a friend through suicide and that is how my girl friend and I came up with this poem.

suger_sweet...This is a poem about friends I thought you might like:

A Friend

A friend is someone we turn to
when our spirits need a lift.
A friend is someone we treasure
for our friendship is a gift.
A friend is someone who fills our lives
with beauty, joy, and grace.
And makes the whole world we live in
a better and happier place.