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  1. Mar 04, 2007 05:51 PM #1
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    Game of tears

    I hear the echoes
    Of the ever lasting pain
    Who knew?
    I’d be
    Here playin there game
    A game
    With a beginning
    And no end

    Feels like a bullet to the brain
    Every scream
    Unheard
    So calm
    Yet so hard to stop the tears
    Hand on my back
    Says
    “It’s ok to cry
    But your
    So strong.
    They say
    If hold back your tears
    You’re just destroying
    Unseen golden years”


    I cry in circles
    With no end
    If only I can push restart
    Back to the years
    So pure
    So unaware
    So oblivious

    Matter of fact death is now seen
    Pain is on pause
    Screams on mute
    I am in the game
    I am the only to move my feet
    Breathe for me
    Think for me

    I control everything in
    A ten foot radiance of me

    I am the game

    Its not there’s

    I am the deifier if my future

    My tears

    My pain

    I am the GAME
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  2. Mar 04, 2007 07:50 PM #2
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    Re: Game of tears

    Wow that was intense, this was my favorite part:

    Quote Originally Posted by Shippo101 View Post
    Matter of fact death is now seen
    Pain is on pause
    Screams on mute
    I am in the game
    I am the only to move my feet
    Breathe for me
    Think for me
    I liked it alot, I look foward to reading more of your work, so keep it up!
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  3. Mar 05, 2007 04:45 AM #3
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    Re: Game of tears

    woah...i can never write any poems like this 1..unless if i copy it lol...
    good job~! keep ur games ahead lol
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  4. Mar 05, 2007 07:06 AM #4
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    Re: Game of tears

    Crap........ What's up with all the deppressing poems. (no offense.) Bur Come on! Someone put a limerick up or somthing! Please.
    More than bored; Sad. More than sad; Unhappy. More than unhappy; Ill. More than ill; Alone in the world. More than alone in the world; In Exile. More than in exile; Dead. More than dead;forgotten.......
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  5. Mar 05, 2007 08:41 AM #5
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    Re: Game of tears

    Nice poem, and I will agree with the other in who posted it is intense! Keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to more from you in the future!
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    Re: Game of tears

    It was really good lol i liked it...............
    hope u write more soon
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