a gaze you just cant shake

unknowingly you kill me
by saying your okay
theres hurt in your eyes
they speakwhat you refuse to say

you were blinded and given
a one way ticket
to a place you know
you've never wanted to revisit

Gods already made you
have a taste of this place
where everyone believes you to be
of a supernatural race

its not death that follows
but a force that stalks you
its the soul of the ones
you betrayed and never truely knew

its taken these spectators a while
for them to realize
your eyes are an abyss
they bleed, as what you gaze upon dies

I like it :D

maybe i could get a bit more input then "i like it" that doesnt really help me...

That a cool one nice it good and awsome.

ok civil w/e dude you didnt even effin read it. wtf is this, like people use to COMMENT poems not jsut try to get there post count higher.

geeeeeeeeez

kill us all now

I really liked it it sounded like alot of work went into to it and also alot of thought went into it to but it seems like theres a mesage you want us to get am I right?or am I just reading to much into it? :s let me knoe kk?

but again good job one of my fav.s^_^

its not death that follows
but a force that stalks you
its the soul of the ones
you betrayed and never truely knew

i like this verse its really dark and you
finaly realise what it is that stalks you
wich is guilt for everyone you hury abd didnt even
bother to get to know you tossed them aside like trash.
that what i get from this . i like this poem alot its realistic
awesome poem

I really like but in my opinion I like ryhms but still great job