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    a gaze you just cant shake

    unknowingly you kill me
    by saying your okay
    theres hurt in your eyes
    they speakwhat you refuse to say

    you were blinded and given
    a one way ticket
    to a place you know
    you've never wanted to revisit

    Gods already made you
    have a taste of this place
    where everyone believes you to be
    of a supernatural race

    its not death that follows
    but a force that stalks you
    its the soul of the ones
    you betrayed and never truely knew

    its taken these spectators a while
    for them to realize
    your eyes are an abyss
    they bleed, as what you gaze upon dies
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    Re: a gaze you just cant shake

    I like it


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    Re: a gaze you just cant shake

    maybe i could get a bit more input then "i like it" that doesnt really help me...
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    Re: a gaze you just cant shake

    That a cool one nice it good and awsome.

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    Re: a gaze you just cant shake

    ok civil w/e dude you didnt even effin read it. wtf is this, like people use to COMMENT poems not jsut try to get there post count higher.

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    Re: a gaze you just cant shake

    I really liked it it sounded like alot of work went into to it and also alot of thought went into it to but it seems like theres a mesage you want us to get am I right?or am I just reading to much into it? :s let me knoe kk?

    but again good job one of my fav.s^_^
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    Re: a gaze you just cant shake

    its not death that follows
    but a force that stalks you
    its the soul of the ones
    you betrayed and never truely knew

    i like this verse its really dark and you
    finaly realise what it is that stalks you
    wich is guilt for everyone you hury abd didnt even
    bother to get to know you tossed them aside like trash.
    that what i get from this . i like this poem alot its realistic
    awesome poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: a gaze you just cant shake

    I really like but in my opinion I like ryhms but still great job


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