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Femmebot's feel nothing. Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Friendly Fridley
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![]() ![]() Credits: 2,215 | Get out. Get out of my head. You dont belong here! You made me wish I was dead! Whats goin' on here? Oooooh.. I wish I could tell you. Just stay away, because Im so afraid. You left me feeling so lonely, feeling so played. But I cant make a promise to break it. Still... I cant take it... just GET OUT! You've turned me into the one that you hate. No intentions on setting things straight. Because to you, its just fine. The only thing I ever wished would be mine. And you just give it away to those who want to escape. Enter my mind... its like rape. You dont even want to be in my thoughts, or my "forget me nots". So just GET OUT! You make everything so complicated. When you say you're unloved... its so overstated. Im ignored, undesired, and so devastated. when I think of all the love that I wasted. And it so hard to be nice. You can hurt me and not even think twice. I know that you were lying that night. But when I was in those arms.. my world felt right. You think because its been a while. That its easy to smile? I hurt everyday. When I think of you... I wish I could say "Just get out." Note: This isn't about a person. Its about a thought. Last edited by Peach_follows; Jun 11, 2007 at 02:17 PM. |
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Newbie | Re: Get out. Quote:
i think it's wonderful. did u create it? if u did, ur amazing. it would also make some pretty awsome lyrics.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 2,215 | Re: Get out. Well I just got a guitar in my possesion... But I have to re-string it. (its a nylon string). But anyway... perhaps I will write songs. *shrugs |
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![]() Credits: 2,641 | Re: Get out. love it reminds me of myself sometimes when i'm trying to forget stuff, great way to do it though and yeah i think it might make a great song but who knows really |
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![]() ![]() Credits: 3,212 | Re: Get out. i like this poem thought or otherwise i like how brutal you were its venting poems like this that make you feel way better afterwords. there is no better way to vent or even think than to do it in a poem |
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![]() Credits: 49,192 | Re: Get out. Ahh... Such a great poem!!! It's great!!! I adore it!!! Because I know how it is to wish to get someone out of your head... I really, really enjoyed reading this poem... It's a wonderful poem! |
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