Thread: Get out.

A thought out of your head, huh...?
It still reminds me of Linkin Park.
In a Good way of course.^^;

Originally Posted by Peach_follows

Get out of my head.
You dont belong here!
You made me wish I was dead!
Whats goin' on here?
Oooooh.. I wish I could tell you.
Just stay away, because Im so afraid.
You left me feeling so lonely, feeling so played.
But I cant make a promise to break it.
Still... I cant take it...
just GET OUT!

You've turned me into the one that you hate.
No intentions on setting things straight.
Because to you, its just fine.
The only thing I ever wished would be mine.
And you just give it away to those who want to escape.
Enter my mind... its like rape.
You dont even want to be in my thoughts,
or my "forget me nots".
So just GET OUT!

You make everything so complicated.
When you say you're unloved... its so overstated.
Im ignored, undesired, and so devastated.
when I think of all the love that I wasted.
And it so hard to be nice.
You can hurt me and not even think twice.
I know that you were lying that night.
But when I was in your arms.. my world felt right.
You think because its been a while.
That its easy to smile?
I hurt everyday.
When I think of you... I wish I could say
"Just get out."

Note: This isn't about a person. Its about a thought.

i think it's wonderful. did u create it? if u did, ur amazing. it would also make some pretty awsome lyrics.

Originally Posted by animecrazygal121

i think it's wonderful. did u create it? if u did, ur amazing. it would also make some pretty awsome lyrics.

Well I just got a guitar in my possesion... But I have to re-string it. (its a nylon string). But anyway... perhaps I will write songs. *shrugs

love it reminds me of myself sometimes when i'm trying to forget stuff, great way to do it though and yeah i think it might make a great song but who knows really

i like this poem thought or otherwise
i like how brutal you were its venting
poems like this that make you feel
way better afterwords.

there is no better way to vent or even
think than to do it in a poem

Originally Posted by Peach_follows

Get out of my head.
You dont belong here!
You made me wish I was dead!
Whats goin' on here?
Oooooh.. I wish I could tell you.
Just stay away, because Im so afraid.
You left me feeling so lonely, feeling so played.
But I cant make a promise to break it.
Still... I cant take it...
just GET OUT!

You've turned me into the one that you hate.
No intentions on setting things straight.
Because to you, its just fine.
The only thing I ever wished would be mine.
And you just give it away to those who want to escape.
Enter my mind... its like rape.
You dont even want to be in my thoughts,
or my "forget me nots".
So just GET OUT!

You make everything so complicated.
When you say you're unloved... its so overstated.
Im ignored, undesired, and so devastated.
when I think of all the love that I wasted.
And it so hard to be nice.
You can hurt me and not even think twice.
I know that you were lying that night.
But when I was in those arms.. my world felt right.
You think because its been a while.
That its easy to smile?
I hurt everyday.
When I think of you... I wish I could say
"Just get out."

Note: This isn't about a person. Its about a thought.

I know how you feel. I often wish I could just forget people or things sometimes... Vehimently infact. (or however you spell it.) I really like this one.. The way it rolls off the tongue (I've started reading quietly outloud to teach myself to have a rhythem to my writing so it won't sound so choppy.)

Ahh... Such a great poem!!! It's great!!! I adore it!!! Because I know how it is to wish to get someone out of your head...

I really, really enjoyed reading this poem... It's a wonderful poem!