I like the third stanza.
"They were never weak, but they'll be forever strong,
Even if in death they were thought to be wrong..."
Are you saying that they wander the mortal plane or are you stating that they exist within us, where their image and influence is strongest?
I like the poem simply because you made me question, as a reader, the intent of the subject within the work.
They are standing, not speaking.
Very goth.
I like it.
Reminiscent of Bauhaus.


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