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    A Gift For You

    Not a cell phone or a novel.

    I give you a poem.
    Its a gift wrapped with tenderness.
    It promises a bond stronger than words,
    like the true friendship between two humans.

    Here.
    It will tug at your heartstrings
    like the feeling of sympathy for another.
    It will make your clouded mind
    clear and serene, like a summer's portrait.
    I am trying to be truthful.

    Not a necklace or a CD.

    I give you a poem.
    Its soulful words will stay in your heart.
    Strong and tender
    as we are,
    for as long as we are.
    Take it.
    Its melodious rhythm turns into a ballad,
    if you like.
    Joyful.
    Its scent will cling to your senses,
    clings to your mind.

    Become a wind, unfathomable distress. I'll hold back your loneliness.

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    Re: A Gift For You

    Wow!!!! This is a great one!!!!! I love it... so clever!!! Can I borrow it? It'll help me explain why I give only a notebook with a poem for a present... ofcourse I'll tell you wrote it and how to contact you to say thank you ^^ Can I?

    A very nice work... I'll be waiting for more!!! ^^

    Your faithful fan Lasura ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: A Gift For You

    Please,go ahead if you want.
    I'm happy to see you enjoying them,and of course making a fan

    Become a wind, unfathomable distress. I'll hold back your loneliness.

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