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    Gimme a while.

    Gimme a while.
    I'm sure that I'll be just fine.
    I just gotta find a way to
    get you out of my mind.

    Gimme a minute.
    You'll see that it's all good.
    Just let me take a little walk
    to get my mind right like I should.

    Gimme some time.
    And I'm sure you'll understand.
    I'm not hiding from you,
    I just quit tryin' to be your man.

    Gimme a second.
    To let you know that I
    love you so much that it
    makes me want to cry.

    So, gimme a while.
    And I can guarantee,
    that when I figure this out,
    I'll be a better Spriggity.


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    Re: Gimme a while.

    Ahh... I just love this poem soo much... It's really great!!! I don't even know what to say... I really, really like this poem ^^

    Great work Sprout!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Gimme a while.

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    Ahh... I just love this poem soo much... It's really great!!! I don't even know what to say... I really, really like this poem ^^

    Great work Sprout!
    Thanks, Laura! It seems this one made ya pretty speechless, LOL. I'm glad you like it so much, I was gonna title this one "Love Sick 3", but I didn't know if it would fit with the other two, y'know?


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    Re: Gimme a while.

    Quote Originally Posted by atomik_sprout View Post
    Gimme a while.
    I'm sure that I'll be just fine.
    I just gotta find a way to
    get you out of my mind.

    Gimme a minute.
    You'll see that it's all good.
    Just let me take a little walk
    to get my mind right like I should.

    Gimme some time.
    And I'm sure you'll understand.
    I'm not hiding from you,
    I just quit tryin' to be your man.

    Gimme a second.
    To let you know that I
    love you so much that it
    makes me want to cry.

    So, gimme a while.
    And I can guarantee,
    that when I figure this out,
    I'll be a better Spriggity.
    I like this one too. It's well written and heartfelt. I like how you tend to get goofie at the end of all of your writing. It makes me giggle.

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    Re: Gimme a while.

    Quote Originally Posted by bratling View Post
    I like this one too. It's well written and heartfelt. I like how you tend to get goofie at the end of all of your writing. It makes me giggle.
    Thanks, hon. It means a lot to me. I hope you can understand. And I hope that we can work this out.


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    Re: Gimme a while.

    Very nice give yourself a pat on the pack because that was one heck of a poem hope to hear more poems from you good luck in the future

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    Re: Gimme a while.

    Quote Originally Posted by Mini Dev View Post
    Very nice give yourself a pat on the pack because that was one heck of a poem hope to hear more poems from you good luck in the future
    Thanks, man. I'm glad to see new people take the time to read my writing. I hope you like my future works as well. ^_^


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    Re: Gimme a while.

    hey that was great i've read some of your others but i don't know if i posted or not, oh well anyway they were all great so do some more love reading them.

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