A girl asked a boy...

A girl asked a boy is she was pretty,
He replied: 'No'.
She asked him if he wanted to be with her forever.
He replied: 'No'.
She then asked him if he would cry if she walked away.
He replied: 'No'.
She had heard enough.
She needed to leave.
As she walked away...
He grabbed her arm and told her to stay.
He said...
You are not pretty, you are beautiful..
I don't want to be with you forever...
I need to be with you forever...
And I wouldn't cry if you walked away..
I would die if you walked away!

This is a poem I wrote once...
And I still like it..
I hope you like it too...
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that is beautiful baby you are very passionate with you poems i am loving all your poems so far keep it up

Well that is something that the most of the girls fear I think..
I fear it too most of the time..

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Originally Posted by mangalovertje

Well that is something that the most of the girls fear I think..
I fear it too most of the time..

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well you shouldn't worry to much i feel that way i can't explian it i just feel it

wow thats like amazing i would have never thought of someone saying that lol and i fear it sumtimes too

This isn't your work.

1.) I've heard this before, a long time ago, well before you were old enough to have written it.
2.) This is nothing like your normal writing style; I find it hard to believe that your grammar and punctuation improves so dramatically from your posts to your poems.
3.) It's plastered all over the net, claimed by a hundred different people, but the true author is unknown.

I've said it before, I'll probably say it a hundred more times...just because the author is anonymous or unknown does not mean you can claim the work as your own.

Closing.