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    A girl asked a boy...

    A girl asked a boy is she was pretty,
    He replied: 'No'.
    She asked him if he wanted to be with her forever.
    He replied: 'No'.
    She then asked him if he would cry if she walked away.
    He replied: 'No'.
    She had heard enough.
    She needed to leave.
    As she walked away...
    He grabbed her arm and told her to stay.
    He said...
    You are not pretty, you are beautiful..
    I don't want to be with you forever...
    I need to be with you forever...
    And I wouldn't cry if you walked away..
    I would die if you walked away!

    This is a poem I wrote once...
    And I still like it..
    I hope you like it too...
    We are affraid of losing controle...But why should you be affraid of losing it...While you didnt have it...

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    Re: A girl asked a boy...

    that is beautiful baby you are very passionate with you poems i am loving all your poems so far keep it up
    i cry inside for life anew i die each time im torn in two i live for earth and die for none along comes a god who will always bring peace and tranquility

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    Re: A girl asked a boy...

    Well that is something that the most of the girls fear I think..
    I fear it too most of the time..
    We are affraid of losing controle...But why should you be affraid of losing it...While you didnt have it...

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    Re: A girl asked a boy...

    Quote Originally Posted by mangalovertje View Post
    Well that is something that the most of the girls fear I think..
    I fear it too most of the time..
    well you shouldn't worry to much i feel that way i can't explian it i just feel it
    i cry inside for life anew i die each time im torn in two i live for earth and die for none along comes a god who will always bring peace and tranquility

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    Re: A girl asked a boy...

    wow thats like amazing i would have never thought of someone saying that lol and i fear it sumtimes too

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    Re: A girl asked a boy...

    This isn't your work.

    1.) I've heard this before, a long time ago, well before you were old enough to have written it.
    2.) This is nothing like your normal writing style; I find it hard to believe that your grammar and punctuation improves so dramatically from your posts to your poems.
    3.) It's plastered all over the net, claimed by a hundred different people, but the true author is unknown.

    I've said it before, I'll probably say it a hundred more times...just because the author is anonymous or unknown does not mean you can claim the work as your own.

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