Girl That I pretend to be

Girl That I Pretend To Be


Look me in the eye, don't walk away
Say all the things you want to say
Don’t lie to me,
don't pretend to be interested in me,
the person I have to be
the girl outside
is so much stronger
than the girl inside that can't hold on much longer
the girl outside is just a fake
inside, I'm about to break
I'm so weak inside but it'll never show
only reflected in the scars, I know
everyone’s telling me don't do this and don't do that
I need to break apart from this image I've made that everyone sees
and I just need someone to believe that I can overcome these things
that drag me down and make me want to die
so now the only question is, is this really goodbye?

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wow.... i was speachless when i read this, is this a song or something? if u just maid it up, ur awsome ^_^

Thank. Yes i did just make it up. um, currently its a poem, i could put a melody to it one day lol.

very awesome othello i could read yuor poems all day but i do that already lol
anywa i know what you mean though i am guy ,i have thse emotions inside,but they only see the outside and thye think im cold and heartless wich to me kind of hurts bvut ehy life wouldbt be intresting with out a few bad perspectives.
i like how you did this peom its awesome

This is so true lol very excellent poem xD make more I love em!

well.........really interesting, good poem

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Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice

very awesome othello i could read yuor poems all day but i do that already lol
anywa i know what you mean though i am guy ,i have thse emotions inside,but they only see the outside and thye think im cold and heartless wich to me kind of hurts bvut ehy life wouldbt be intresting with out a few bad perspectives.
i like how you did this peom its awesome

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lol, you read my poems all day?? thats awsome! ^^ makes me feel all umm....warm and fuzzy inside lol. You are like a big fan of mine, seriously. its so cool.:D. you got the basic point of the poem. Yes! thank you for you comment as usual HolderOfTheDarkCHalice!!

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Originally Posted by Violent

This is so true lol very excellent poem xD make more I love em!

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Yesh i must make more. But in a time. i dont usually put my poems online, u know cause they personal lol. But i dont mind putting some on now and then. Thank you for you comment!^^

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Originally Posted by Dark wolf

well.........really interesting, good poem

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thank you!