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    Girl That I pretend to be

    Girl That I Pretend To Be


    Look me in the eye, don't walk away
    Say all the things you want to say
    Don’t lie to me,
    don't pretend to be interested in me,
    the person I have to be
    the girl outside
    is so much stronger
    than the girl inside that can't hold on much longer
    the girl outside is just a fake
    inside, I'm about to break
    I'm so weak inside but it'll never show
    only reflected in the scars, I know
    everyone’s telling me don't do this and don't do that
    I need to break apart from this image I've made that everyone sees
    and I just need someone to believe that I can overcome these things
    that drag me down and make me want to die
    so now the only question is, is this really goodbye?

    <O: please comment>

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    Re: Girl That I pretend to be

    wow.... i was speachless when i read this, is this a song or something? if u just maid it up, ur awsome ^_^
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    Re: Girl That I pretend to be

    Thank. Yes i did just make it up. um, currently its a poem, i could put a melody to it one day lol.

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    Re: Girl That I pretend to be

    very awesome othello i could read yuor poems all day but i do that already lol
    anywa i know what you mean though i am guy ,i have thse emotions inside,but they only see the outside and thye think im cold and heartless wich to me kind of hurts bvut ehy life wouldbt be intresting with out a few bad perspectives.
    i like how you did this peom its awesome
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Girl That I pretend to be

    This is so true lol very excellent poem xD make more I love em!

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    Re: Girl That I pretend to be

    well.........really interesting, good poem
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    Re: Girl That I pretend to be

    Quote Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice View Post
    very awesome othello i could read yuor poems all day but i do that already lol
    anywa i know what you mean though i am guy ,i have thse emotions inside,but they only see the outside and thye think im cold and heartless wich to me kind of hurts bvut ehy life wouldbt be intresting with out a few bad perspectives.
    i like how you did this peom its awesome
    lol, you read my poems all day?? thats awsome! ^^ makes me feel all umm....warm and fuzzy inside lol. You are like a big fan of mine, seriously. its so cool.. you got the basic point of the poem. Yes! thank you for you comment as usual HolderOfTheDarkCHalice!!

    Quote Originally Posted by Violent View Post
    This is so true lol very excellent poem xD make more I love em!
    Yesh i must make more. But in a time. i dont usually put my poems online, u know cause they personal lol. But i dont mind putting some on now and then. Thank you for you comment!^^

    Quote Originally Posted by Dark wolf View Post
    well.........really interesting, good poem
    thank you!

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