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    Re: "Give" (Involves Cutting)

    I didn't read the topic at first.. and when I read it.. it somehow gave me a VERY wrong idea ^^" (Let's not you and I get into detail about it now shall we ) xD The rhyming was quite enjoyable and I have to say the font does capture the attention of the reader. Nice job.

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    Re: "Give" (Involves Cutting)

    I haven't cut in over a month. ^_^ It's an accomplishment for me; though I usually make it to one month. Why do I cut? The poem says it for the most part. Only it's usually because I get so angry and I can't express myself in words, so the result is I cut... Though I now get into trouble for cutting, because I recently had to go to a mental rehibilitation center.

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    Re: "Give" (Involves Cutting)

    Well its good hear u havent cut ur self over a month its not a way out i have a fiend that did that i always told her to stop when i seen her bw about the poem now

    eny way i liked it even if its about cutting nice job star
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    Re: "Give" (Involves Cutting)

    This is a good poem. Though I've never cut before it gives the feeling as if I had or something like that. (Dont know if you understand that) But it was good. The rhyme scheme threw off though. But it was good poem nun the less.(^.^) Keep it up.

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    Re: "Give" (Involves Cutting)

    Okay... To let everyone know, I wasn't trying to make it ryhme though some may. ^_^ Thankyou Koga and R.P. Princes for the comments.

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