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    Give Me A Chance!

    There is a place that never thinks
    of love as a game , there is a time
    when things meant for you will be ,
    from Dusk till dawn there is a place
    that is meant for everything you could
    ever want.

    Just close your eye's and i
    will kiss you like there's no
    tomorrow , that moment will
    let you feel how beautiful
    you really are or it will make you
    hate me for what i tried to make you
    feel.

    The time has come for me to
    show you how love can be , i
    just want you to feel beautiful,
    just once in your life i want you
    to be happy , close your eye's
    as i kiss you , let me show you
    how love feels.

    I pull you close as we kiss
    under the pale moon light ,
    let your worries melt away as
    i hold you , if my kiss dosnt show
    you , then my heart isn't what you
    need.

    If you dont feel a thing , then its me
    and if your heart dosnt skip a beat then
    its me , just close your eye's and i will
    kiss you like tomorrow will never come,
    i just want you to feel beautiful , if i cant
    i will let you go and you can live your life
    with somone else.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Give Me A Chance!

    This is such a beatuiful poem, Chris... just wonderful... very, very nice... lovely and dreamy... I like everyting about it... the thought of it- the thing you're saying here, the way you decribe everything... I love every single thing about this poem!!! ^^ Ahh... almost made me cry!

    A great work Chris!!!!!!!!! Absolutely wonderful!!!! All the good words in english couldn't explain how great this poem is! ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Give Me A Chance!

    Very sweet and romantic poem that lets you prove if you kiss someone or touch them and if they don't feel what they're supposed to feel then it must not be you they want. You've hit the nail on the head with this one.
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