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    Lightbulb Give and Take.

    *Disclaimer: This isn't directed toward ANYONE. I just haven't written anything that actually rhymes in a while, and I figured why not write something angry while I'm happy. ^_^ I hope you like it!*

    Give me peace, give me balance.
    Let me rest under a tree.
    Take your shit, take your grievance,
    and get a way from me.

    Give me time, give me respect.
    Don't call me so damn much.
    Take it direct from my aspect.
    Your acquaintance? I'm nonesuch.

    Give me a break, give me silence.
    I don't need to f****** talk.
    Take a pill, take a nap,
    Take a mother f****** walk.

    Give me peace, give me balance.
    'Cause that's all I really need.
    Take a f****** leave of absence!
    I wish you'd just let me be...

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    Re: Give and Take.

    I really love this one also!!!! A great peom, enjoyed reading it soooooooooo much!!!! Don't really know what atracts me so much to this poem... I guess it's just that I'd wish to be so cool to someone sometimes!
    A great work sprout!!! Thank You, I really enjoyed reading it!

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    Re: Give and Take.

    this is like exactly what i feel when my parents pressure me into everything; marks, school work, piano. so this is something i have to remember next time they start talkin thx man

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    Re: Give and Take.

    You say its not about anyone... yet it explains so much.

    Taking my leave.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Give and Take.

    that one is really good Sprout. I am not really into poetry but i liked this one. good job
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    Re: Give and Take.

    This poem is such a cool, angry, and happy in many ways! This is such a awesome poem!!!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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