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    The Glass Breaking Teardrop

    His soul crushed.
    A single tear sheds,
    from the corner of his eyes,
    and slides down my face.

    Carefully,
    it runs to the tip of his nose.
    It comes to a drip,
    and plummets to the floor.

    In the moment that it falls,
    is the moment that it turns to blood.
    The tear mixing magically,
    becoming a droplet of blood.

    It shifts back from the droplet of blood,
    to the droplet of tear,
    that the corner of his eye,
    created it into.

    A pure tear.
    perfect in shape and form.
    Yet....
    this tear reflects blood.

    There is no blood around,
    and yet it can be seen,
    inside the tear,
    that drops to the floor now.

    Rolling in mid-air,
    as it falls.
    The floor will soon be,
    the new home of the teardrop.

    The glass breaks when the tear hits,
    as the weight of the tear,
    causes the shards to fly,
    in all directions in the air.

    The tear falls forever,
    so long as the scar is open.
    So long as it's open,
    the blood of his sorrow will flow.

    The teardrop will fall,
    and break the glass floor,
    of the man from whom,
    the teardrop falls from.

    The man bleeds inside,
    as his heart was ripped,
    from the very chest,
    by the one he loved.

    The tear drop falls,
    and breaks the fragile glass floor,
    of the man that is kneeling,
    and praying to God now.

    The teardrop will forever fall,
    so long as the scar is open.
    The scar will forever be open,
    so long as he lives.

    And thus,
    with every moment he's reminded...
    the teardrop will fall,
    and break the glass floor of this man.......


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    Re: The Glass Breaking Teardrop

    @.@ haunting poem... the poem goes on and on without alternate ending... it's haunting...

    I love the descriptions... potrayed nicely how the tear would fall in a slow mo.. i can see the picture vividly... it's a sad poem.. but i don't understand what's makes this man sad and this added another reason to the haunting...

    broken glass could meant broken heart... is it?

    another very good poem.. i like this... keep it up enjoyed reading this ^^

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    Re: The Glass Breaking Teardrop

    Very deep..........and full of swirling emotions!!!!!!!!!
    Great words and rhythm......very nicely done!!!!!!!!!
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