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    Glass Goodbye

    He's leaving again
    For the second time
    And once he's gone
    I'll have nothing that's mine

    After the time has passed
    And he returns
    I won't be the same
    I've had more lessons learned

    My glass goodbye is going red
    I should have said no
    But I fell still
    And he's going back to zero

    I trusted to much
    And hoped much more
    That he'd stay this time
    And not shut the door

    The calendar's pages will strip away
    I'll grow hollow and cease to live
    And I'll turn to ashes in the cold
    I can't hold him captive

    My glass goodbye is going red
    I should have held on longer
    But I stopped reaching
    And the air seems thinner

    I spent my life trying to get here
    But I'll be the only one
    Because he is leaving
    And I'm forgotten

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    Re: Glass Goodbye

    ur love one....the who has hurted the first time....you were naive n closed ur eyes the things tht he is......jus hoping tht it isnt true but it is.....u've accept the truth n decided to let him go for the better

    Nice poem but I dun get the line "My glass goodbye is going red"
    either than tht it's good, keep it up

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    Re: Glass Goodbye

    Awesome break up poem! I like the whole red glass part! But dont worry about him! U will have plenty other lovers, who will love you more than you ever thought, returning your genorosity. I thought when i started to read it that it would be corny and a type of diary, but i was wrong. I don't comment on poetry that i don't like. So you get a sticker!

    I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.

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    Re: Glass Goodbye

    I really like this. It seems to be well put together!

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