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Newbie | Glass Goodbye He's leaving again For the second time And once he's gone I'll have nothing that's mine After the time has passed And he returns I won't be the same I've had more lessons learned My glass goodbye is going red I should have said no But I fell still And he's going back to zero I trusted to much And hoped much more That he'd stay this time And not shut the door The calendar's pages will strip away I'll grow hollow and cease to live And I'll turn to ashes in the cold I can't hold him captive My glass goodbye is going red I should have held on longer But I stopped reaching And the air seems thinner I spent my life trying to get here But I'll be the only one Because he is leaving And I'm forgotten |
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![]() ![]() Credits: 1,304 | Re: Glass Goodbye ur love one....the who has hurted the first time....you were naive n closed ur eyes the things tht he is......jus hoping tht it isnt true but it is.....u've accept the truth n decided to let him go for the better Nice poem but I dun get the line "My glass goodbye is going red" either than tht it's good, keep it up
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![]() ![]() Credits: 601 | Re: Glass Goodbye Awesome break up poem! I like the whole red glass part! But dont worry about him! U will have plenty other lovers, who will love you more than you ever thought, returning your genorosity. I thought when i started to read it that it would be corny and a type of diary, but i was wrong. I don't comment on poetry that i don't like. So you get a sticker!
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