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    Re: Glass of tea

    The words have a real solid meaning to them...............
    Ooh.. i hit the jackpot it seems but this is no pure luck xD thx... it seems that my goal reached it's purpose ^^

    I have never read a poem with this title and I am not sure the words correspond to the title correctly
    But overall, nicely done!
    well...i dont know... i was a bit fuzzy with the title.. so..i just... put the one that lingers in my head..

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    Re: Glass of tea

    What gave you the the idea to use the metaphor of tea? Its an interesting view to like at creation, very creative RayMe.

    I do like how you look at the different aspects of creating tea, almost makes me want a cup of tea and reflect on what you have mentioned. Its a very creative piece indeed.

    Although I did linger on referring sugar as them. Personally it didn't feel right to me. I felt like at first it was a metaphor for you drowning by bullies. Untill I read on a little more.
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    Re: Glass of tea

    Wow, Ray! This poem was awesome! It definitely rocked my socks! ^_^
    It was very descriptive and meaningful. I epecially like how you compared life to a cup of tea (which so happens to be my favorite drink, LOL).

    Time has passed by like the grains of sugar,
    Going by slowly then picking up speed as gravity pulls.
    Many things have happened in between those times,
    Some are sweet like the sugar and some bitter like the tea.
    Best line in the entire poem. It's so metaphorical, so beautiful, so... GOOD! I'd have to say that this is one of the best poems I've ever read by anyone! Thank you for making my day with this very creative piece of work! ^_^ Kudos!


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    Re: Glass of tea

    What gave you the the idea to use the metaphor of tea? Its an interesting view to like at creation, very creative RayMe.

    I do like how you look at the different aspects of creating tea, almost makes me want a cup of tea and reflect on what you have mentioned. Its a very creative piece indeed.
    thank you.. im suprised that came from you.. ^^ i really appreciate you reading my poem ^^ thank you ~

    Although I did linger on referring sugar as them. Personally it didn't feel right to me. I felt like at first it was a metaphor for you drowning by bullies. Untill I read on a little more.
    Bullies? @.@

    Wow, Ray! This poem was awesome! It definitely rocked my socks! ^_^
    It was very descriptive and meaningful. I epecially like how you compared life to a cup of tea (which so happens to be my favorite drink, LOL).
    Not you too~!!! i love tea~!!! xD

    Best line in the entire poem. It's so metaphorical, so beautiful, so... GOOD! I'd have to say that this is one of the best poems I've ever read by anyone! Thank you for making my day with this very creative piece of work! ^_^ Kudos!
    stop exxagerating.. *pokes* ^^

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    Re: Glass of tea

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    thank you.. im suprised that came from you.. ^^ i really appreciate you reading my poem ^^ thank you ~

    Bullies? @.@
    Yeah you know the people who pick on you and take things one step too far and almost drown you in a swimming or fountain. I don't know but that is the image that came into my head. Although it may not have been thought of like that but instead that the sugar represent evolution and the sugar evolves to mix with the water. But from a life a point of it represented bullying for me.
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    Re: Glass of tea

    This poem is a "wow" .. different type than the usual ones ... but i wonder what things are considered as "spoons of sugar" in your life compared to a cup of tea! ... very inspiring
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    Re: Glass of tea

    sugar represent evolution and the sugar evolves to mix with the water
    @.@ hmm.. i could use that.... hmm thanks

    Spoons of sugar... sugar are sweet... i compared sugar to.. happiness in this poem... ^^ spoons of sugar meaning happiness given and brought by those near to me... little by little they make the tea taste sweeter.. thus creating a nice tea.. but too sweet it self is not good so i used tea... since tea is bitter... ^^ thank you dear clan member

    and yes i was making tea while thinking about life..

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