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    Glazed Eyes and Tear Stains

    Glazed Eyes and Tear Stains


    Death and Rebirth
    Nightmares and Dreams
    Tears and Smiles
    Hate and Love...

    "So many ways"

    So many different emotions exist, Maybe to many
    Do we really need all of these, Or can we erase a few from our memories?
    Can't we just exist in this world unhurt, Or are we destin to be in heart ache for all time?
    Must we always be heartbroken, Or is there another path that we may take?!...

    "Is there any other way?"

    I'm so broken on the inside, Tonight is filled with only tears
    Tear stains on my pillow, And sad music playin in the background
    Through the music you can hear a small whimper, Then a choked sob follows
    Over on the bed is where you will find me, Under the covers and drowning in my tears!...

    "Oh, I'm drownin"

    I can't help but to cry myself to sleep everynight, Since there is no one to hold me
    No one will ever love me, I know that but it's still so hard to except it all
    I just wanna be loved by anyone, Just like all of the other girls in the world
    Is that so wrong to want it, Or am I just being to selfish?!...

    "Am I being selfish?"

    Am I not loved because I am a sin, Or am I just to stupid to even understand?
    I just wanna know why, Why did it have to be me?
    Why couldn't it have been someone else, Instead of me?
    Where did I go wrong in the world, Or is it just meant to be?!...

    "Is this to be my destiny?"

    Am I meant to be all alone for the rest of my life, Or will someone save me from my lonelyness?
    All alone in this messed up and cruel world, Why couldn't anyone ever love me?
    My hearts been broken so many times already, So why does everyone still have to play games with it?
    My eyes are glazed over and hold unshead tears, That wont last cause everyone is gonna make them fall!...

    "Eyes glazed and Tears stains"

    I'm so broken on the inside, Tonight is filled with only tears
    Tear stains on my pillow, And sad music playin in the background
    Through the music you can hear a small whimper, Then a choked sob follows
    Over on the bed is where you will find me, Under the covers and drowning in my tears!...

    "Oh, I'm drownin"

    I can't help but to cry myself to sleep everynight, Since there is no one to hold me
    No one will ever love me, I know that but it's still so hard to except it all
    I just wanna be loved by anyone, Just like all of the other girls in the world
    Is that so wrong to want it, Or am I just being to selfish?!...

    "Am I being selfish?"

    Can anyone ever save me from the darkness inside my own heart, Or will it devour me whole?
    Heart incased in darkness and throns, Can anyone ever break through my walls?
    Is it possible to ever do such a thing, Or am I really meant to be alone forever?
    Forever can be such a long time, Do I really have to spend it all alone?!...

    "All alone in the darkness of my own heart. Waiting and hopeing that someone will save me from...Myself!"...
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    Re: Glazed Eyes and Tear Stains

    Well written!
    I love how honest this is...
    You've got your heart on your sleeve with this... I wish more poems were that full of the writers.
    You touch on a lot of life issues, as well.
    Beautiful writing! ^_^

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    Wow! Thank you soooooo very much for the awesome comment Spike'sRose! *hugs* Your comment has made me sooo happy. I'm so glad that you liked it and thought that it was well written. Thanks again so much.
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    Re: Glazed Eyes and Tear Stains

    "Am I being selfish?"

    Am I not loved because I am a sin, Or am I just to stupid to even understand?
    I just wanna know why, Why did it have to be me?
    Why couldn't it have been someone else, Instead of me?
    Where did I go wrong in the world, Or is it just meant to be?!...

    "Is this to be my destiny?"

    Am I meant to be all alone for the rest of my life, Or will someone save me from my lonelyness?
    All alone in this messed up and cruel world, Why couldn't anyone ever love me?
    My hearts been broken so many times already, So why does everyone still have to play games with it?
    My eyes are glazed over and hold unshead tears, That wont last cause everyone is gonna make them fall!...
    i like these verses because i have been here and know the sandess and have
    felt the lonlyness though i never cried i just held it in becuase i
    fiugred it was pointless to waist tears on my sefl when no one else gave
    a damn, but in reality there is one person that does when you
    open your eyes and thats you becuase that the only one who
    will ever care for you when yu see that then it want be as hard.

    very awesome pome sis and i loved this one
    your really geting great at these song's
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Glazed Eyes and Tear Stains

    Thank you soooo very much for the awesome comment big bro!! *hugs* I'm glad that you like it and that you think that i'm getting great at writting songs.
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    Re: Glazed Eyes and Tear Stains

    Once again you have done an outstanding job. Bravo sis! I loved how truthful it was of how love can sometimes be that way and how it makes alot of people feel of thinking they're meant to be alone forever,but when they least expect it someone does come along to save them from the lonlieness they've suffered with for so long. I can't wait to read your next one cause I already know it's gonna be great.
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    Thank you sooooooooooooooo very much for the lovely and wonderful comment Sis!!! *hugs* I'm glad that you like it. And I hope that oneday my prince will come and save me. Thanks again so much Sis! *hugs*
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    Re: Glazed Eyes and Tear Stains

    Outstanding job on the song Angel! The emotion exploding from the poem is real, and I know someone will come and save you from your loneliness! Keep up the great work as you always do here on AO!

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