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    Exclamation Gloomy days...

    I'm alone; it's been clear.
    Quiet voices pass my ears.
    Drifting voices, dead and cold.
    Raindrops linger on the window pane.
    I close my eyes and I try to hold the pain inside.
    Shadows dance across the floor.
    Leaving questions at rest.
    Unspoken words drift through out time.
    Lost emotions down the drain.
    Gray clouds and gloomy days.
    I'm needing something but I am so unsure.
    Echoes down the hall.
    Feelings mixed in the air.
    Smelling purfume, suffocating me.
    Fight the tears with happy thoughts of sunny days.
    I've been trapped inside my own small world.
    I think about later days, in the past I would have cried.
    But that's all changed.
    Feelings twisted in this mess.
    Tangled thought; alone again.
    My heart is left in dark.
    Quiet mentionings of love again, but not again.

    Comment this, I'm not to sure about this one...
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    Re: Gloomy days...

    WOW! that was really good!

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    Re: Gloomy days...

    yes it is however i could have a competitive spirit as well but ill keep my competitiveness to myself ^_^

    I am a sage....the light of elements

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    Re: Gloomy days...

    nice one, this poem is really catchy, nice job.

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