omg I love these two!! You are so good at poem writing! btw, my favorite one was "Abyss"! I hope to see more~!!
alright i know im going to get harrassed about my grammar, spelling and puncution... but look past that if you can!
anyhow some of you might remeber me... ive been here just not posting on the site ive stuck to my pms. anyhow im bringing a few poems this way!
darkness swells and lurks around every corner.
it consumes those with weak souls.
devouring and ever conquering...
it leds into the depths of the abyss.
spreading and corrupting all around it
it moves with a swifting pace
to control those that are corrupt and dismantled
it must grow and feed on its prey.
as the time moves on a fog covers me
dragging me in its perptual net.
dragging my heart into the blacking abyss
corrupting my heart and my love....
i fight to live but im being controlled and torn apart
by the mistakes of my past.
walking along this life, been walking along alone.
im treading my own path, but its so hard by myself.
im on a path to nowhere, a path that is cloudy and dark.
im treading so lightly, but i fear im out of luck.
its true that a few times others paths have crossed my own, its true that some even walked beside me.
but in the end they have all left me, so i tread on in hopes of recovery.
im walking on my fine line, but the threads are so thin.
i wish someone would lend me a line, and walk beside me.
im still walking now, but its only a matter of time before the my weight comes crashing down.
im treading on and on but the road is so dark.
I really, really enjoyed reading these two.
But I liked the second one better... It's so da*n lonely it made me feel less lonely ^^ It has something darkly wonderfull... I just love these kind of poems I guess...
A really nice work, I hope to see more!! ^^ Need help with answering your PMs? ^^ lol
My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge
thanks you two! im glad someone enjoyed them.
ummm no i dont need help answering my pms.....though i do get too many.. darn them stalkers!!
well i guess since you two liked them so much i guess ill write more for you two!