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Going To Get You
Hiding in the darkness of the shadow
Away from human eye can see
Sitting there waiting for my sign to go
I hear steps upon steps
They are getting closer
My heart is racing hoping I do not miss my moment
I can feel their presence next to mine
I grab their leg they scream
To my satisfaction I am pleased
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Re: Going To Get You
this is good but i wouldn't have ended it with two stanzas though to build the anticipation and kinda like a song with a meter i guess but his one is good.
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Re: Going To Get You
thank you very much...I was just in a mood to write down something scary you could say..but I tried to write more I couldn't