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    Child Of God Kiani Haki22 is off to a good start Kiani Haki22's Avatar
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    Going To Get You

    Hiding in the darkness of the shadow
    Away from human eye can see
    Sitting there waiting for my sign to go
    I hear steps upon steps

    They are getting closer
    My heart is racing hoping I do not miss my moment
    I can feel their presence next to mine
    I grab their leg they scream
    To my satisfaction I am pleased

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    Re: Going To Get You

    this is good but i wouldn't have ended it with two stanzas though to build the anticipation and kinda like a song with a meter i guess but his one is good.
    "In your arms is where i will be, I love you till my forever ends."
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    Re: Going To Get You

    thank you very much...I was just in a mood to write down something scary you could say..but I tried to write more I couldn't

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