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    As darkness flows in
    The light slips from within
    and goes black
    There's no turning back
    When those once loved are gone
    There's nothing left but to carry on
    Though the journey seems so long
    In the end we'll all be gone

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    Even we are going to be gone...which is definite... ^^ thats we should enjoy
    the "remaining" days...even though the darkness hurls around u does'nt mean that u should sulk and think that u are in a bad shape all the time... try to find your self a light to show u the way..a guide...^^ brighten up your world...

    Short~! and i like the methaphor.. ^^ would love to read more of urs...
    good job~!

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    thanks. i haven't written any in some time now.Maybe i can dig up my old poem called war.. it's pretty good.

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    it ...somehow seems like a metaphor to me....its really good jamie..short but very emotional with alot of potential words keep it ↑ girl!!! ♥~*The Princess*~♥
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Quote Originally Posted by iluvmyloser View Post
    it ...somehow seems like a metaphor to me....its really good jamie..short but very emotional with alot of potential words keep it ↑ girl!!! ♥~*The Princess*~♥
    *laughs* thanks... it isn't as good as you make out to be though...

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    A nice one ^_^! It's a fact indeed... Yeah... We'll just got to move on and survive until the time comes...
    Carve an amble now,
    Saying that the day's still bright,
    And let's play with time.

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