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    Gone Away


    If you look in my eyes
    tell me what do you see?
    Do you see any joy there?
    whats becoming of me...
    I was so Happy..
    Laughed about everything
    But now i sit here
    mad at the world
    at things i can't change
    Its funny how life gives
    you lemons
    But how in the world
    do you make Lemonade?
    I don't know what to do now
    i used to be on top
    of the world
    but now i'm uncertain
    because its all confusing to me...
    Now i sit here and i
    stare
    at th ese stingy whitewashed
    stained walls...
    i said look in my eyes!
    Now...
    tell me..

    What do you see?
    Hurt and despair
    yes!
    And you understand
    why i'm here...
    I feel really bad
    taht your stuck here
    i guess we
    die here together....

    The same ol'
    brightness in your
    smile...
    has quickly
    faded away...

    Again look into my eyes
    and you see the tears
    stream down my face
    As they close the door
    they put me in this
    funny chair
    i politely ask the guard
    to stay
    i tell him when you watch look
    at me...

    straight in my eyes
    won't you please?
    And when i'm gone
    mark my grave
    and
    place the description
    of waht you saqw
    He didn't understand why
    then
    After that day he knew
    He saw no joy,
    no happiness
    no despair
    nor hurt

    He then didn't know waht to say then
    silently opened the door...
    un-clicked my straps
    and carried me
    out.

    I didn't have a casket...
    i was buried right there
    and then
    He found a stone and
    carved in it


    "There she lies, so
    strong and brave; staring at her
    own demise"
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    Re: Gone Away

    wow umm wow it is hard to put this to words but i feel despair humility and shame i feel as if the world rejects me for that it how i interpreted this poem it is marvalous wonderful keep it up
    i cry inside for life anew i die each time im torn in two i live for earth and die for none along comes a god who will always bring peace and tranquility

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    thank you for you comment i really appreciate it! ^^
    I'm the best you'll ever have because i am that f*ing AMA-zing chic who can stand on her own d*n feet and becasue of you I am the Greatest Thank you so much SasuraiHell and Gwen

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    most poems i read i really can't relate to it or its to much or to less. Or it could be just the people who write them i cant' relate to. But i this poem i can. i feel the emotions coming from it. i love it. =)

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