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    Goodbye

    It’s hard to say goodbye now
    To know that I’ll never see you again
    My friend, I can truly say you will be missed
    We weren’t the best of friends, but we had love
    It hurts to look for you and know that your not there
    At the same time it eases my mind to know you’re in a better place
    I remember the times when I thought I never wanted to see you again
    Now it pains me that you can’t come back
    When my own couldn’t be there, you were my older brother
    You were the definition of a true friend
    I need my friend now
    It’s hard looking back and remembering the times
    From coming to your knee,
    To coming to you shoulder
    I’m glad I got to know you before you finally went home

    R.I.P Eric, this is my goodbye to you.
    Your cousin,
    Meishelle

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    Re: Goodbye

    OMG Evil you have me in tears. I know how this feels for my cousin was always there for me to before he died and I wrote a similar poem I will put it up soon for you to read it.
    ™Mommy To Micah And Shawn!™


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    Re: Goodbye

    Normally, I fret about lack of punctuation. But this poem can hold it's own. Nice job.
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    Re: Goodbye

    thanxx, im glad you liked it, maybe i'll do better next time

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    I like it! Keep up the good work. And next time add periods.

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    Re: Goodbye

    do better? this poem is really great, nice dedicated to your cousin may his soul rest in peace, hope everything works good for you, o and great poem keep it up

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    Re: Goodbye

    I like this poem alot. ^_^
    I know how it feels to lose a loved one. I lost my brother about a year and a half ago. May your cousin rest in peace, and good work on the writing.


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