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    Goodbye

    Goodbye...

    Get off my back
    Leave me alone
    I don’t want to hurt you
    But Go away

    I hate the way you smile at me
    I hate the way you love me
    I hate everything about you
    I hate the way you lie

    You smile at me
    When it’s fake
    To make me believe
    That you really care

    You say you love me
    But do you really
    Because I can’t tell
    I don’t think I really care

    Everything about you
    Has blessed me in some way
    And yet I can’t seem to get the
    Stench of you off me from that one day

    The way you lie
    Really surprises me
    Because you always seem to make believe
    Everything you say

    So you love me
    Yeah right
    Get away from me
    You f****** lie

    Your tears don’t affect me
    Not anymore
    Your heart is ripping
    Oh the joy in ones eyes

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    Re: Goodbye

    Such a sad poem! Beautiful, though. Keep up the good work.

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    Re: Goodbye

    Yes, a sentimental poem. Nicely written. Good job! [:

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    Re: Goodbye

    I agree with everyone it is sad but it is still good, keep up the good work *tears*
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    Re: Goodbye

    ... damn...wheres is this this rain coming from... *looks up* no wonder it's warm.. @.@

    *clears throat* a nice poem... ^^ hmmm kinda sad...i could feel anger...but i dont feel it out much... the way it end does show you are satisfied he is hurt... so i guess thats why theres not much anger ^^
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    Re: Goodbye

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    ... damn...wheres is this this rain coming from... *looks up* no wonder it's warm.. @.@

    *clears throat* a nice poem... ^^ hmmm kinda sad...i could feel anger...but i dont feel it out much... the way it end does show you are satisfied he is hurt... so i guess thats way theres not much anger ^^
    The rain is coming from the tears that every broken heart shares...

    Thank you guys for liking my poem... I'll try to write more for you guys, as a matter of fact i have one running though my head right now... Anyway....

    Just remember guys..... what goes around comes around........ *glances out a window*

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