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    Goodbye

    Goodbye

    I've said good bye
    over a dozen times
    But this was the last straw
    It's my final goodbye

    You've been with her for a year
    You've been with me a little over half
    We got engaged and broke it off
    To many times that I can think of

    You always acted innocent
    So sincere
    But now we come to find out
    It was all a lie

    I'm not much of a person
    Who says such things
    But you don't deserve to walk this earth
    As a matter of fact, i wish you'd die

    But before you go...
    I'd like you to know
    That i did love you
    But now that seems so long ago...


    It's a poem i just created and i know it isn't anywhere near my best and even though i tried i just can't get it off my chest... I hope you enjoyed it and understand... if not I guess it wasn't the best plan...
    X.x.X The only thing I'll ever want... X.x.X

    X.x.X Is for you to love me the way I love you.. X.x.X

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    Re: Goodbye

    sounds like me, on one of my angry days. Then I realized... to be THAT upset, it means you still care. And if you still care... how sure can you be that this is the final goodbye.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Goodbye

    It wasn't... >< I don't think that there ever will be. Were back together and happy.... slightly. ^^
    X.x.X The only thing I'll ever want... X.x.X

    X.x.X Is for you to love me the way I love you.. X.x.X

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    Re: Goodbye

    Its a dark poem like your super mad i didnt like all the maddness it was like okay for me but keep writing .

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