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    Goodbye

    Goodbye...It’s a moment of the hardest moment in life ever
    And how it's hard at my heart
    Because...Today I say Goodbye to someone very close to my soul
    And ...I will not see him again
    Cry my eyes cry
    And full this life by my tears and make it sad
    I don’t know…could I be happy after this day
    Could the smile back to me...Could That?
    I don’t think I can be happy after I lose him
    Yes...
    The Death makes it and breaks us up
    But, your soul will be here deep in my heart by my side
    And I still love you until I meet you again
    I don’t know, how I will live, how I will counties my life with out you
    With out your beautiful eyes or just your warm embrace
    Ah...Destiny you break me up from my lover
    Why? Why destiny? Why you choose me between all over this people …? Why?

    Foolish beating

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    Re: Goodbye

    Goodbyes are hard enough when the person is only leaving OUR life. Let alone their own. Death is a hard thing to deal with. Definitely. My grandfather recently died and he's the only person close to me that I've had to deal with dying. It's new, and it's hard. I hope you have plenty of support, because It hink if I'd lost my boyfriend, or someone involved more day to day with me, that it'd be a hell of a lot harder for me then this is.
    The wording seemed a little odd at times, maybe it's the grammar. But the feeling and story still shines through perfectly. <3

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Re: Goodbye

    That’s right bratling... the hardest thing that we can’t ignore it or just deal with it ..and I write this one because I really lose someone and the cause is the Death …
    I am sorry for your losing and Thanks for your comment …

    Foolish beating

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