Goodbye poem no.2

Farewell..i shall leave with a promise...


The sun is rising like always,
but to me it's different.
The winds might feel the same,
but the breeze is not ordinary to me.
For i will remember this day forever...

Everything is different to me today.
I have done all the need to do's,
but it feels like i have'nt done something yet.
I think it's too hard for me to do.
It shall be a burden for me to carry.

Then again, I look to the horizon.
I give out a faint trace of smile.
This i shall remember.
The last sight of the horizon with you.
I wipe down my tears.
I don't want you to see me cry.

I wanted to hug you.
No, it's more than that.
I also want to kiss you,
but i fear i must depart with this secret.
The only thing i have about you.
The only thing for me to keep.

I hope you will wait for me...
I am hoping for a welcome back hug.
For i will be back someday.

sheesh gtg guys,... time to hit the... ZzZzZzZ
feel free to comment.. :hattip:

I love your poem^_^
I can relate to it.
hope to read from you.

Sure thx..lol not really that gr8 though.. ^^ but this is kinda a sad moment i wanna be in... romantic eh ^^

Nice poem Ray i liked it alot, sleep good sleep very good XDD

I liked your poem it was a little sad. It was as if you didn't want to leave here eventhough you had to. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Aaah, love xD the ending somehow reflects the "gtg but i dun wanna leave" thing that cherry mentioned xD Nice job.

I LIKE IT I FEEL YOU LIKE THE SUN BUT YOU SHOULD LOVE MOON.STARS.OR WRITE POMES ABOUT THE MOON :D

It was during the dusk :/ how can i tell about moons and stars ~! :p

thx for the comment all ^^