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    Goodbye poem no.2

    Farewell..i shall leave with a promise...


    The sun is rising like always,
    but to me it's different.
    The winds might feel the same,
    but the breeze is not ordinary to me.
    For i will remember this day forever...

    Everything is different to me today.
    I have done all the need to do's,
    but it feels like i have'nt done something yet.
    I think it's too hard for me to do.
    It shall be a burden for me to carry.

    Then again, I look to the horizon.
    I give out a faint trace of smile.
    This i shall remember.
    The last sight of the horizon with you.
    I wipe down my tears.
    I don't want you to see me cry.

    I wanted to hug you.
    No, it's more than that.
    I also want to kiss you,
    but i fear i must depart with this secret.
    The only thing i have about you.
    The only thing for me to keep.

    I hope you will wait for me...
    I am hoping for a welcome back hug.
    For i will be back someday.

    sheesh gtg guys,... time to hit the... ZzZzZzZ
    feel free to comment..
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    Re: Goodbye poem no.2

    I love your poem^_^
    I can relate to it.
    hope to read from you.

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    Re: Goodbye poem no.2

    Sure thx..lol not really that gr8 though.. ^^ but this is kinda a sad moment i wanna be in... romantic eh ^^

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    Re: Goodbye poem no.2

    Nice poem Ray i liked it alot, sleep good sleep very good XDD
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    Re: Goodbye poem no.2

    I liked your poem it was a little sad. It was as if you didn't want to leave here eventhough you had to. I look forward to reading more of your work.
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    Re: Goodbye poem no.2

    Aaah, love xD the ending somehow reflects the "gtg but i dun wanna leave" thing that cherry mentioned xD Nice job.

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    I LIKE IT I FEEL YOU LIKE THE SUN BUT YOU SHOULD LOVE MOON.STARS.OR WRITE POMES ABOUT THE MOON :D

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    Re: Goodbye poem no.2

    It was during the dusk :/ how can i tell about moons and stars ~!

    thx for the comment all ^^

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