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Mar 27, 2007, 03:28 PM
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  1 )3^^( )N  Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better...
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 Credits: 59,118 | Goodbye poem no.2 Farewell..i shall leave with a promise... The sun is rising like always, but to me it's different. The winds might feel the same, but the breeze is not ordinary to me. For i will remember this day forever... Everything is different to me today. I have done all the need to do's, but it feels like i have'nt done something yet. I think it's too hard for me to do. It shall be a burden for me to carry. Then again, I look to the horizon. I give out a faint trace of smile. This i shall remember. The last sight of the horizon with you. I wipe down my tears. I don't want you to see me cry. I wanted to hug you. No, it's more than that. I also want to kiss you, but i fear i must depart with this secret. The only thing i have about you. The only thing for me to keep. I hope you will wait for me... I am hoping for a welcome back hug. For i will be back someday. sheesh gtg guys,... time to hit the... ZzZzZzZ feel free to comment..  Last edited by RayMe; Mar 29, 2007 at 02:11 AM. |
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Mar 27, 2007, 03:34 PM
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Credits: 59,118 | Re: Goodbye poem no.2 Sure thx..lol not really that gr8 though.. ^^ but this is kinda a sad moment i wanna be in... romantic eh ^^ |
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Mar 27, 2007, 09:44 PM
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| ~The Master~  Join Date: May 2005 Location: Massachusetts
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Credits: 18,101 | Re: Goodbye poem no.2 Nice poem Ray i liked it alot, sleep good sleep very good XDD
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Mar 28, 2007, 12:45 AM
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 Heavy Metal Goddess  Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: a place where the stars shine as bright as the sun
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Credits: 2,336 | Re: Goodbye poem no.2 I liked your poem it was a little sad. It was as if you didn't want to leave here eventhough you had to. I look forward to reading more of your work.
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Mar 28, 2007, 02:23 AM
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| Elie Jelly  Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Hell is an understatement
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Credits: 2,051 | Re: Goodbye poem no.2 Aaah, love xD the ending somehow reflects the "gtg but i dun wanna leave" thing that cherry mentioned xD Nice job. |
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Mar 28, 2007, 06:14 AM
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Credits: 59,118 | Re: Goodbye poem no.2 It was during the dusk :/ how can i tell about moons and stars ~!  thx for the comment all ^^ |
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