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    Grandpa

    Grandpa
    You were always the strong one
    tall and proud and brave
    You were always my favorite
    but now you’re to close to your grave

    One visit you were fine
    healthy as a horse
    The next you had deteriorated
    60 to 0 was your course

    I can remember driving
    to the store with you
    With the top down and wind blowing
    nothing could have made me blue

    When I went to see you
    it was a smack in the face
    My energetic grandpa
    was gone without a trace

    Your attitude held strong
    but your body lagged behind
    now ill never see you again
    but you will never die in my heart or in my mind

    ______________________________________________
    this is dedicated to my gradfather whos body is so impared that he has chosen to stop the treatment that keeps him alive. He has only a few months left on earth and I will miss him dearly
    Last edited by friend_of_fish; Jun 22, 2006 at 07:50 AM.
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    Re: Grandpa

    beautiful! very touching! i especially like the end- do u plan on making more? if u do, i look forward to them!
    You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same.

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    Re: Grandpa

    i dont know my only poetry that doesn't stink is when im either really mad or really sad so its kinda a spur of the moment thing
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    Re: Grandpa

    oh, i see- so if i really tick u off sometime, will u write a really good poem? lol
    You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same.

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    Re: Grandpa

    yup that is the secret to get to my poet inside
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    Re: Grandpa

    interesting...i'll keep that in mind
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    Re: Grandpa

    anyone els like it? :smile2:
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    Re: Grandpa

    yea i did no wait i loved it u gals are good at this poetry thing i give two thumbs up keep up the good work

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