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    Re: Grandpa

    thanks it was kind of hard for me to right and every time I read the last 2 lines i start crying again
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    Re: Grandpa

    Really nice and emotional poem.

    My favourite verse:
    Quote Originally Posted by friend_of_fish

    Your attitude held strong
    but your body lagged behind
    now ill never see you again
    but you will never die in my heart or in my mind
    I like how you mentioned his attitude staying strong, it means his personality will always be the same..

    Maybe if you chose your words better, it would of flowed more...

    Still, a very nice poem!

    TY Sasurai for the lovely sig!*

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    Re: Grandpa

    thanks it was just thrown together quickly when i first found out about him so it wasnt thought threw
    i actually wrote that last line as i was sharing this with my friend
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    Re: Grandpa

    i wish i can at least spend time wif my grandpa's
    get to know them abit better =/

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    Re: Grandpa

    Im glad it made you feel that way hes very close to me
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    Re: Grandpa

    yeah.. grandma and grandpa's are really cool. like my niece and nephew..she should enjoy it when my mum and dad is still alive cuz she keep spoiling them.im jealous.she never spoiled me.phhtf

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    Re: Grandpa

    people tend to do that not appretiate things till there gone
    i wish i spent more time with my grandpa but he lives half way across the country so its hard
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    Re: Grandpa

    that was beautiful, just beautiful

    you are now on my list of favorite poets, 2nd only to Forever A Dreamer

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