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    Gratifying Rest

    Here lies this abode
    As for the dead man's rest
    So long before the sunset in the west
    Hysterical essence converged in this epochal day
    As eerie as ego of collosial slay
    As cleaving as cylindrical javelin of heaving coil
    As stupefy of shackeling foil
    Here lies this dead man's grave
    As for those strafing brave
    Justify this waves of ethereal solemn of gratification
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...

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    Re: Gratifying Rest

    Good but it s in need of decoding. It starts off on target. But it is hard to understand at the end. But interesting choice of words.

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