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    Cool " The great battle " A Tribute to the fighting

    The great battle:

    Why must I fight?
    For faith?
    Who am I fighting for?
    Myself?
    All I know is that,
    My friends are all dead,
    My enemy's keep coming,
    What should I do?
    Keep fighting for the heavens?
    Should I leave and let more people die here today?
    My friends told me,
    Fighting for the faith is the ultimate service you can give to HIM,
    Why am I fighting for HIM?
    Why is he not fighting with us?
    I hate killing,
    I cant stand it any longer.
    I have to escape.
    But how?
    With the arrows flying through the air and the swords before me it's impossible.
    Why must we do this?
    Cant we all just get along?
    My blood staind hands are now burning in fury,
    My sword wishes for more.
    I have only one thing to do now.
    Fight.

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    Re: " The great battle " A Tribute to the fighting

    Cool nice poem Im not kidding
    Semper Fi Carry On

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    Re: " The great battle " A Tribute to the fighting

    ''I am doing the best that I can"

    Cya guys later.

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    Re: " The great battle " A Tribute to the fighting

    wow, from the fighting for God to giving the sword a sort mind, which craves for blood. This ssooo wicked, I look forward to reading more of ur stuff.

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: " The great battle " A Tribute to the fighting

    My eyes couldn't find any major nor minor errors, Bud!!! So, I do not have anything that I want to suggest for improvement. A brilliant piece of work. One thing I noticed is that you wrote poem filled with questions, and tried to make the reader see why those questions are hard to answer, which makes the poem quite unique compared the other ones that you wrote.

    Keep it up!

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    ^^ I like. Very nice. Nothing wrong, but you just knew what was coming next. No catch, but if that was you were going for. This is Great. ^_^
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    Re: " The great battle " A Tribute to the fighting

    very well done young viper, perhaps one day you might become a poet one day

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    Re: " The great battle " A Tribute to the fighting

    One day?

    I am the Poetic Warrior you only get to see once in a lifetime.
    I cant stop writing it's my life,
    My soul,
    I cannot go on without it.
    I tell you a poem then that's it,
    Darkness controls you from that point on.
    (Evil laugh)

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