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Old May 03, 2006, 01:53 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Cool " The great battle " A Tribute to the fighting

The great battle:

Why must I fight?
For faith?
Who am I fighting for?
Myself?
All I know is that,
My friends are all dead,
My enemy's keep coming,
What should I do?
Keep fighting for the heavens?
Should I leave and let more people die here today?
My friends told me,
Fighting for the faith is the ultimate service you can give to HIM,
Why am I fighting for HIM?
Why is he not fighting with us?
I hate killing,
I cant stand it any longer.
I have to escape.
But how?
With the arrows flying through the air and the swords before me it's impossible.
Why must we do this?
Cant we all just get along?
My blood staind hands are now burning in fury,
My sword wishes for more.
I have only one thing to do now.
Fight.
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Old May 03, 2006, 02:01 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: " The great battle " A Tribute to the fighting

Cool nice poem Im not kidding
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Old May 03, 2006, 04:43 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: " The great battle " A Tribute to the fighting

''I am doing the best that I can"

Cya guys later.
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Old May 04, 2006, 09:59 AM   #4 (permalink)
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wow, from the fighting for God to giving the sword a sort mind, which craves for blood. This ssooo wicked, I look forward to reading more of ur stuff.
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Old May 04, 2006, 10:10 AM   #5 (permalink)
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My eyes couldn't find any major nor minor errors, Bud!!! So, I do not have anything that I want to suggest for improvement. A brilliant piece of work. One thing I noticed is that you wrote poem filled with questions, and tried to make the reader see why those questions are hard to answer, which makes the poem quite unique compared the other ones that you wrote.

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Old May 04, 2006, 10:14 AM   #6 (permalink)
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^^ I like. Very nice. Nothing wrong, but you just knew what was coming next. No catch, but if that was you were going for. This is Great. ^_^
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Old May 04, 2006, 10:25 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Re: " The great battle " A Tribute to the fighting

very well done young viper, perhaps one day you might become a poet one day
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One day?

I am the Poetic Warrior you only get to see once in a lifetime.
I cant stop writing it's my life,
My soul,
I cannot go on without it.
I tell you a poem then that's it,
Darkness controls you from that point on.
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Old May 05, 2006, 06:39 AM   #9 (permalink)
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it's very good, but i did see one thing that i kinda didn't like- it kind of seems like you just rushed some of the lines in.....Just my opinion. But it's really good.
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It's a action type of poem.
I didnt have time to think it out
Im really wicked at this though.
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the love you have may vanish
into mystic air of cold
for you will never have love again
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