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    it's very good, but i did see one thing that i kinda didn't like- it kind of seems like you just rushed some of the lines in.....Just my opinion. But it's really good.

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    It's a action type of poem.
    I didnt have time to think it out
    Im really wicked at this though.

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    the love you have may vanish
    into mystic air of cold
    for you will never have love again

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