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Reply With Quotelol, wow i think u nail wut love is. but tht's my opinion. It's lil short on the side but it's okay for me.
What is love?
love is like the great eagle,
it's great wings pull it high, in greater and greater need
then in blissful surrender it drops, wings folded
but then at the last moment it pulls away, coming so close but never reaching the end.
and like the eagle is love.
it climbs the relationship building, "just friends as it were"
until the apex reached, the 'friend becomes oh so much more'
and in blissful surrender plummets into hope, only to pull away before telling
this is love, but only temporary
**addition**
but now i stand here, or am i falling
i'm ready, ready to jump
and this time there will be no pulling up
in hope, in fear in joy i stand here now
and the waves of life may they never move me
as i say i love you
and this, this is love, that which is eternal
the fall continues, only to be born up on the winds of love.
ooohhhhhh now i really like it
Last edited by B1ad3_k1n6; Apr 20, 2006 at 10:20 AM.
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i keep on thinking it's not good bye, i keep on thinking it's our time to fly
FRIENDS FOREVER!!
lol, wow i think u nail wut love is. but tht's my opinion. It's lil short on the side but it's okay for me.
Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
ok, i added a third stanza sorta longer then the other two but i really really like it, hopefully you people do to, please comment!
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i keep on thinking it's not good bye, i keep on thinking it's our time to fly
FRIENDS FOREVER!!
A great poem on love! Like always, I am a huge fan of love poems. Yours is well thought out. The meaning is beautiful, and it defines love, covering most areas. I truly love it. Keep up the great work! And, write some more, and please share with all of us. It will be much appreciated. ^_^
thank you, i really appreciate the comments everyone!
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i keep on thinking it's not good bye, i keep on thinking it's our time to fly
FRIENDS FOREVER!!
I love the metaphors...... it is definitely an awesome piece. Great work
That´s Excellent, You really know what you are talking about, Really Great
love is just the awesome work of our brain!! nice pome man, keep it up.
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