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    The great definition.

    What is love?
    love is like the great eagle,
    it's great wings pull it high, in greater and greater need
    then in blissful surrender it drops, wings folded
    but then at the last moment it pulls away, coming so close but never reaching the end.

    and like the eagle is love.
    it climbs the relationship building, "just friends as it were"
    until the apex reached, the 'friend becomes oh so much more'
    and in blissful surrender plummets into hope, only to pull away before telling
    this is love, but only temporary

    **addition**

    but now i stand here, or am i falling
    i'm ready, ready to jump
    and this time there will be no pulling up
    in hope, in fear in joy i stand here now
    and the waves of life may they never move me
    as i say i love you
    and this, this is love, that which is eternal
    the fall continues, only to be born up on the winds of love.


    ooohhhhhh now i really like it
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    Re: The great definition.

    lol, wow i think u nail wut love is. but tht's my opinion. It's lil short on the side but it's okay for me.

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    Re: The great definition.

    ok, i added a third stanza sorta longer then the other two but i really really like it, hopefully you people do to, please comment!
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    Re: The great definition.

    A great poem on love! Like always, I am a huge fan of love poems. Yours is well thought out. The meaning is beautiful, and it defines love, covering most areas. I truly love it. Keep up the great work! And, write some more, and please share with all of us. It will be much appreciated. ^_^

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    Re: The great definition.

    thank you, i really appreciate the comments everyone!
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    Re: The great definition.

    I love the metaphors...... it is definitely an awesome piece. Great work
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    That´s Excellent, You really know what you are talking about, Really Great

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    Re: The great definition.

    love is just the awesome work of our brain!! nice pome man, keep it up.

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