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    Great Depression

    I wrote this off the top of my head.

    With the flames of love
    Spirling around me
    The Icy cold
    Grasp of control
    Grabbed me by the wrist
    And I was hurtled
    Down the hall of despair
    Great flames
    Of everlasting regretting
    Soon the moon
    Shall meet you there
    And the sun
    And the moon
    Shall collide
    To make the love
    Once lost restore
    To its original place
    Ontop of the universe
    Unfortunately,
    All this story is
    Is hope
    And hope in love
    Is useless
    As hope can lead
    To the false
    Way of life
    That shall destroy
    The very fabric
    Of your life.
    And now to me,
    This one true love
    Is the epitimy of hell.
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    Re: Great Depression

    well this was kinda scary....shadow i've seen another side of you now that writes poems.good description i can almost piture it in my head!!!
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    Re: Great Depression

    oooh i like this poem too^^ you have a way with words... I want to hear more^^

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    Re: Great Depression

    I like the poem its kind of scary but very good with the way you used the words!! keep up the good work and can't wait to hear more!!

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    Re: Great Depression

    Oh my how scary yet how sad.....brought a single tear to my eye! Great job on this poem shadow very good describing!! Hope to see more!^^



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    Re: Great Depression

    HHmm...i like the description but it's a bit confusing... ^^ but it's a good piece...good job... keep up the good work ^^

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    Re: Great Depression

    Thanks guys. I'll write more later. . . . . . . . .

    A big thanks to Renn for the sig! THANK YOU!

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    Re: Great Depression

    A nice one... I liked reading this, very interesting and the fact that it's a bit confusing is just the thing that makes it... special...

    I really enjoyed reading this ^^ I bet I will see more in the 4 pages I still have to read, no?

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