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    Greater

    [I]
    Has far as the eye can see
    the ocean
    my love for thee
    is greater
    the many stars above
    for you my love
    is greater
    many moutnain peaks
    to me my heart speaks
    still my love for you
    is greater
    more then blades of
    grass
    more then grains of
    sand
    more then all the
    land
    my love is
    greater
    no number will ever amount
    to the love i feel
    to no number can you count
    for my love is far greater
    [/


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    Re: Greater

    Wow really great poem it's like it was meent for someone special ^^ but maybe you should've picked another color for the text, it's not so easy to read, unless you highlight it, but anyway really great poem, greater than great

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    Re: Greater

    I like it really I do...
    It is what someone feel when he/she is in love...
    Love is the greater then anything else...
    Wanna read more from you...
    Keep going on...^_^...
    We are affraid of losing controle...But why should you be affraid of losing it...While you didnt have it...

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