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    Green

    Spring breeze teases leaves
    Grass growing on Grandma's grave
    Green sea off White Beach

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    Re: Green

    Is this a haiku? I love haikus. but if it isn't , i still like and repect it very much.

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    Re: Green

    Yes superstar, it is my attempt at haiku. Apparently you think I did well. Thank you for your kind words.

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    Re: Green

    I love how haikus can be so loving yet short.
    I love the way you write with scenery.
    You're a really good writer! I like your poem.
    Last edited by Takuan; May 01, 2010 at 02:19 PM. Reason: Sorry about that

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    Re: Green

    I enjoy haikus as well. I do my fair sharing of writing poems. Poems of all kinds. I really liked this poem beast. It's deep, yet calming, I enjoyed it.

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    Re: Green

    yes it is a great poem, talks about life, death, and peice of mind. this is what i think, it is a great hiku.

    within the darkened realm of the mind, is endless shadows, wrenching pain, warming love, and burning desires.

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    Re: Green

    Quote Originally Posted by beast View Post
    Yes superstar, it is my attempt at haiku. Apparently you think I did well. Thank you for your kind words.
    well your attempt did very well. i recently had gotten into poems. mostly haiku and free verse poems.

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    Re: Green

    Quote Originally Posted by Dragons2801 View Post
    yes it is a great poem, talks about life, death, and peice of mind. this is what i think, it is a great hiku.
    Dragons is right not mention you did all that in three lines It takes a very good writer to convey both imagery and emotion with so few words
    Sword in hand, fire in heart, I walk towards my future just playing my part.
    The school of the undefeated East! The winds of the king! Zenshin! Keiretsu! Tempa! Kyoran! Look! The East is burning red!” (G Gundam)
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