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  1. Dec 21, 2007 01:12 PM #1
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    Grow up or Shut up (or: "Molehill Mountain")

    Oh, grow up or shut up!
    You're makin' me mad!!
    What? You can't make a choice
    without approval from mom and dad?

    Makin' mountains out of
    mole-hills, and hiding in the past.
    You gonna keep holding grudges
    until the world kisses your ass??

    You're a grown ass woman!
    I'm gettin' tired of your crap!
    Make an adult decision instead
    of setting booby traps!

    There's always an excuse
    to justify your actions.
    It's your fear that is
    probably causing these distractions.

    Quit playin' high school
    games! I already graduated!!
    And right about now, I'm
    gettin' pretty agitated!

    So either grow up or shut up!
    'Cause I don't want to blow up.
    Shut up or grow up! 'Cause
    your tact could use a touch up!

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    Re: Grow up or Shut up (or: "Molehill Mountain")

    Whoa......this poem is like an explosion of strong emotions and feelings.....it really grips and fascinates your mind.........the rhythm is also pretty smooth
    Great job!!!!!
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    Re: Grow up or Shut up (or: "Molehill Mountain")

    SPROUT!!!! MY GOD YOU PISSSED YOU OFF?
    Excellent poem anyway. I loved the emotion you held throughout it.

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    Re: Grow up or Shut up (or: "Molehill Mountain")

    Donno how I missed this one, but it's great. It flows and rhymes flawlessly and the images and messages it permotes is fantastically conveyed, can feel the anger rolling off you like heat off a fire.. <3

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!
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    Re: Grow up or Shut up (or: "Molehill Mountain")

    absolutely wonderful
    i can see you talking, or better screaming at someone whos just come in drunk
    i love the passion, and the anger and the emotion in this.
    absolutely love the passion
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