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    Growing pains

    At birth I cried, once
    Torn from my soul’s
    Cradle. And down
    Will come the baby, cradle and all.


    The day my nearest and dearest
    Shot me in me [rather sensitive] heart
    I sat on my knees,
    In silence.

    When my first ever true love,
    _____, rejected my proposal,
    I read the entire holy books, twice and
    Went to our tree in the
    [Let’s say imaginary] Park where we had shared
    Valentine-like days, and with grief, scratched our
    Pact of love from its
    Unforgiving trunk.

    My life’s disappointments
    Were what tarnish[ed] my dreams
    And my life now temporarily is
    Distorted with a little slumber …
    [I don’t want to wake up]

    Sleep seldom visits sorrow;
    When it doth, it is a comforter.

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    Re: Growing pains

    Ahh... this is sad... A quite depressive poem... But I enjoyed reading it... especially the third stranza, reminds me of myslef... lol...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Growing pains

    aww rave thats sooo sad {im actualy crying now lol}

    but that poem was awsome full of emotion and true feelings i wished it had worked out for u and your one true love rave i really do ^^

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    Re: Growing pains

    Sorry it made you cry, Lizzie. But in a way love is Satan's aspiration. and I am starting to wonder whether it' healthy for you or not.

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    Re: Growing pains

    haha well as im gonna tell u love is healthy im surtent amounts lol
    and eveyone has a specal person out there for them who will stick by them forever like a pengwn has one mate and thats for there whole lives but people have the down fall of having heartbreak and the strugle to get over it most times and its k that u make me cry lol ^__^ great poem

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