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    Grown Men Cry

    He has to maintain this armor
    For the sake of his last shred
    Of Honor.

    In a mans life
    He should only cry a few times
    But for you he has turned few
    Into far to many.
    His pain now bellows for the world to see.
    So why cant you see
    For you he is reduced to a man
    On a knee.

    A solider don’t cry
    But for you
    He resigned.

    He ripped his heart out
    And hide in your pocket.
    And every night its your face in his heart shaped
    Locket.
    That he stares at hoping God hears
    His invisible ink tears.
    Because he thinks maybe instead of
    Dragging you away
    God might listen this time
    And bring you back to him someday.

    Because he doesn’t want me,
    He’s been fighting for you since
    Round three.
    And he is losing
    Im patching up his wounds
    And Im woozy
    How can I love a man that doesn’t want me?

    If I someday earn a spot in his heart
    I’d be surrounded by you,
    Everyday be reminded of his influence: you.
    And If I leave,
    I’d just be another: you.
    I cant see how you can leave a man crying,
    I’d personally come back running.

    To see his armor open for the world to see
    All because of me.
    But its you that he shows his weakness too
    I just get the dried expression
    Left by abandoned love and--


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    Re: Grown Men Cry

    crying isnt something i do i rarly do like when my dad had passed away
    i think guys should show restraint in tears unless it cant be helped. your poem
    speaks volums on guys and how they neer show emotion unless they feel brave enough
    to.

    i like this poem and thats what i get from this
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Grown Men Cry

    Really well written. Lengthy but not cumbersome. And I like the way it flows.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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