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    GTMO Ghost

    Going up stairs but it’s other footsteps I hear.
    I see nothing and feel a sudden rush of fear.
    Panicked, frantically looking but nothing is there.
    Still I hear something in the hot Cuban night air.
    Realized it was only echo that got my ear.

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    Re: GTMO Ghost

    That was a little scary =O
    But still a good poem! Nicely titled in my opinion. =]

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    Re: GTMO Ghost

    What does GTMO means? o.o Hmm.. short and crispy.. i'll leave this one with that comment.. very simple but nice

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    Re: GTMO Ghost

    GTMO Means guantanamo naval base, abbreviated in military code as GTMO, in the media as GITMO and pronounced "Get Moe."

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    Re: GTMO Ghost

    So.. what inspired you with this poem then beast o.O it's a bit unusual with the title.. lol

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    Re: GTMO Ghost

    What made me think of it is when I spooked myself out by my own echoing footsteps on my way to the courtyard at night. I swore I heard someone else but it was me.

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    Re: GTMO Ghost

    your poem was great. it great amount of suspence it . i enjoyed reading your work
    keep them coming .
    the line that caught me was
    i see nothing and i feel sudden of rush of fear.
    [COLOR="rgb(72, 209, 204)"]that line realey pops out that you[/COLOR]

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