Guardian

I asked you on that day not to let me go
But you choose to forget me
I can see that almost everyday
Am not blind, I can see

I know am invisible to you
You erased me from existence
From our history and past
I can put up a little resistence

You keep pushing hard
You keep walking away from my shadow
I still and always follow you
I know you'll die as a widow

Just because am not always there
But I'll keep watching you
Every day and every night
This is what Angel Guardian's do

You can feel like your being protected
Thats because your safe when am around
Though I don't have magical powers
But I can makes sure your safe and sound

I know its a little odd, and I can't come up with a ending, so I need your guy's opinion about this and see if I made any error's of what so ever.

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I can put up a little resistence

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its... resistance right? thats the correct spelling.. is it? ... tenchu san? :p

Hmm.. it's not odd... ^^ nicely done there... been long since i last see you post poems..
:p keep up the good job ok...

Hmm...it dont feel like a poem much...you need to play with words more man... :)

LOL, hey ray man, I had been playing with the words, but sometimes I can be a little confusing you know? anyways thanks for correcting my *vocabulary* and thanks for leaving a good comment.