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    I asked you on that day not to let me go
    But you choose to forget me
    I can see that almost everyday
    Am not blind, I can see

    I know am invisible to you
    You erased me from existence
    From our history and past
    I can put up a little resistence

    You keep pushing hard
    You keep walking away from my shadow
    I still and always follow you
    I know you'll die as a widow

    Just because am not always there
    But I'll keep watching you
    Every day and every night
    This is what Angel Guardian's do

    You can feel like your being protected
    Thats because your safe when am around
    Though I don't have magical powers
    But I can makes sure your safe and sound

    I know its a little odd, and I can't come up with a ending, so I need your guy's opinion about this and see if I made any error's of what so ever.

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    Re: Guardian

    I can put up a little resistence
    its... resistance right? thats the correct spelling.. is it? ... tenchu san?

    Hmm.. it's not odd... ^^ nicely done there... been long since i last see you post poems..
    keep up the good job ok...

    Hmm...it dont feel like a poem much...you need to play with words more man...

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    Re: Guardian

    LOL, hey ray man, I had been playing with the words, but sometimes I can be a little confusing you know? anyways thanks for correcting my *vocabulary* and thanks for leaving a good comment.

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